Persuasive Essay Help (introduction paragraph)? - introduction of a persuasive essay on surveillance cameras in school
I am preparing a lecture on animal rights perusasive ... "Can anyone tell me if this is correct so far, and help me think a little more substance? I have nothing to do one of these A / B, 7 Class (im a senior now) so any help is great ... This is what I so far:
As of 1700 the idea of animal welfare has been questioned. Human rights have been since men and women, there are discussions, but the animal right until recently not a major problem. This is the injustice and the abuse of a species is less tragic than the other? In this essay I will talk about the rights of animals, in particular the exploitation of animals in clothing, experimentation and research and the entertainment industry.
I only needif hook and work are in place and in the background a little thank you!
Wednesday, February 24, 2010
Introduction Of A Persuasive Essay On Surveillance Cameras In School Persuasive Essay Help (introduction Paragraph)?
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I was a college English ... To take it as you want! :) I think that your hook is white, I'm a little confused about the definition of its argument. It focuses on the rights of animals, in particular, or the comparison of human rights? is something of a mess. I just wanted to make his point succinctly and then I would try to define the points of the plot a little better. But your idea is great, and thy wrath / conviction is a big test that I would like to read! gl
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